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when you lie, it's only the beginning
the lie spins and spins more lies
an intricate web of deceit
where you have no control

Then you get paranoid
you start to believe everyone is lying
no one can tell the truth if you can't

Then you go crazy
people think you are crazy because "everyone lies"
you trust no one

Then you then you are alone
dying
refusing help from anyone

they give up
you are alone in the dark
because no one likes crazy people

so you die
alone
all because of a lie
©2005-2010 ~incandia-mortalitus
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ok so this is my first fairly good poem (i think so)

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:iconxxpunkgothluvxx:
I like it. Please write more poems. You are pretty good at it. This poem could use a grammer check, but other than that.....nicely done.

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:iconraukodae:
Until someone come along and finds the truth inside of you...then its okay.

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:iconlordofthenoodles:
Nice, i mostly like poems that rimes but thise one has somthing its just really good

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i love it........amazing concept that one lie can kill you.....very true though
"because no one likes crazy people" <- my fav line :P

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